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Triolet

Sun Apr 3, 2011, 12:58 PM


I had a bout of insomnia last night, which, amongst other things, led me to the discovery of a form of poem called a Triolet. It's moderately complicated, and I'm not going to try to explain it, but I found it via this awesome online poetry generator. Here are a couple I came up with. A while ago `Grandchild coined a fabulous word, "pseudodeep". I think both of these qualify as that: :giggle:

We readjust the tattered mold
   thus rehabilitations start
so unfulfilled, so very cold
we readjust the tattered mold
so smudged, so very uncontrolled
    so doctrinaire, so very smart
we readjust the tattered mold
    thus rehabilitations start.

  We are the unprepared frontier
   you thread the sacrificial sailing
  you are convincing and unclear
    we are the unprepared frontier
   so reappearances disappear
       so overblown, so unavailing
  we are the unprepared frontier
      you thread the sacrificial sailing.



Have a go yourself!  AND SHARE.
The generator is here: [link] (updated to correct link)

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`UnicornReality Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
MANY POSTS FROM ME
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`joannastar Apr 3, 2011   General Artist
YES MANY. also I meant to link to [link]
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`UnicornReality Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I PASTE ONE

Rose kissed me to-day.
Will she kiss me tomorrow?
Let it be as it may,
Rose kissed me today.
But the pleasure gives way
To a savour of sorrow; —
Rose kissed me to-day, —
* Will she kiss me tomorrow?
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`UnicornReality Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I PASTE ONE

Rose kissed me to-day.
Will she kiss me tomorrow?
Let it be as it may,
Rose kissed me today.
But the pleasure gives way
To a savour of sorrow; —
Rose kissed me to-day, —
* Will she kiss me tomorrow?
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`UnicornReality Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I WILL WRITE YOU ONE

The morning sorrows rise
So hazy are the views
Oh how the summer flies
The morning sorrows rise
Murky, cloudy skies
I hear a voice - who's?
The morning sorrows rise
So hazy are the views
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